/elite/

Not my type of stuff, but pretty good writing
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https://pastebin.com/dhzf7W1S

I made a thread about it before the purge, but here's my MHA weight gain story inspired by the Jeetdoh panels (minus the Ochaco inflation)

Tags: Tsuyu, Toga, Momo, Ochaco, Weight Gain, Force Feeding, Near Bursting, Brainwashing

I am working on a sequel right now. If anybody has any interest I could write up the outline
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I've received a lot of positive responses to my slow burn feeder-feedee story, "Repaid in Full".

A starving girl gets caught stealing from a bakery and has to work as an indentured servant to work off her debt. Another girl her age who works at the bakery becomes infatuated with the idea of fattening her up. (Pic semi-related)

https://www.deviantart.com/countingcarbs/gallery/73274173/repaid-in-full
https://www.deviantart.com/corpulency/gallery

Just started a dA. So far I've posted an Aliens story and the first of hopefully a longer running series of Interspecies Reviewers stories.

Tags are at the start of the stories. I'd really appreciate any feedback, especially on the Interspecies ones. I tried a bit of a scattershot method of story set-up and want to know if it's digestible
>>635
>>621
Normally not huge into slob, but this is some good shit.

Makes me want to add in some light slob to my work
Wattpad kicked me off, opend up a Deviant Art page.

https://www.deviantart.com/bardoflard

All of my stories, including the upcoming chapters of Lifestyles of the Young and Obese, will end up here along with some of my sketches. Enjoy!
I've been writing an overwatch weight gain story on my da page. Thought this might be a good time to share it.

http://fav.me/ddz75pn
>>35
Great story!
Do you have the sequel, or the outline yet?
>>681
Not yet. I put some partial work in but kind of lost interest in the face of other projects. I definitely want to clean it up and post it on my dA at some point though
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>>15 (OP)
I've primarily done "caption" style mini-stories like pic related, although I'm planning to branch out soon. I also don't really pair them with images anymore since I'm not an artist, only a writer, and doing them without an artist's consent feels gross.

Check me out and let me know what you think!

https://www.deviantart.com/duckrexraptor

A checkup with Angela "Mercy" Ziegler
https://www.deviantart.com/duckrexraptor/art/Doctor-Mercy-s-Orders-810988623

Camilla Fire Emblem feeds you
https://www.deviantart.com/duckrexraptor/art/Camilla-Stuffing-and-Care-823234533

Other Mother tempts you to stay and eat
https://www.deviantart.com/duckrexraptor/art/Other-Mother-s-Temptations-810998132

Spider-Gwen makes her move
https://www.deviantart.com/duckrexraptor/art/Spider-Woman-Feeding-810998984

Asking other writers here - does anyone have any resources to share about starting commissions, or feel like talking sometime so I can pick your brain?
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Posting my contributions here too!

My first story, 'Sweet Dreams' features a magical drug that transforms a person's body to their desired body. For the main character Ava, that means becoming a SSBBW and more as she discovers herself during vacation. It's currently being redone with grammar and story improvements on Dimensions, but can be found at my Deviant Art as well.

https://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/threads/sweet-dreams-bbw-ssbbw-immobility-xwg-body-tranformation-sex-stuffing-stuckage.129262/

My current ongoing work is a Totally Spies fanfic saga taking place after the "Passion Patties" episode. In this alternate universe, Clover copes with her SSBBW body, and slowly falls in love with her new size. All the while intertwined with a plot to revive Passion Patties.

30+ chapters, and still ongoing with other characters planned to gain as well!

All chapters here:

https://www.deviantart.com/i-am-18-i-swear/gallery/70117674/post-new-passion-patties-a-totally-spies-fanfic
https://www.deviantart.com/crazykid338/art/Diana-s-Secret-part-3-707502633


there's like 10 of these and I just started recently on a new one. This might be my fav. Ignore the shitty drawings on my profile, they suck.

I like to try and mostly just write stories that focus on the jerking off material and get as quickly from one lecherous description to the next. Like, ngl it makes for some really generic plotlines and flat characterization, but I'm also trying to make porn here - not fiction. If that sounds like your thing then enjoy!
>>35
I cleaned up and posted this story onto my DeviantArt account if anybody wants to read my other stuff.

Be warned, I write a lot of bursting.

deviantart.com/corpulency
>>989
Speaking of bursting, do inflation/popping stories go here or in the other
Wattpad kicked me off because someone complained about my content so I made a Deviant Art page.
All of my stories so far are there plus some drawings.
https://www.deviantart.com/bardoflard
Visit parts 1 and 2, Lifestyles of the Young and Obese, and so on will be updated there from now on as well.
>>1108
All 4 were excellent, please continue. I don't have a lot of specific suggestions but stuffing, burping and tight clothes are always a good bet
Hey what sound better

Dragon king and chubby human princess with romance and weight gain theme

Or

Dragon and human maid. Same as previous but with more lewd and love making.
Been posting here since this board was bbw-chan.net, but I haven't shilled myself too often.
>Unhellthy: a WG series involving Loona from Helluva Boss
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Unhellthy-A-Helluva-Boss-Weight-Gain-Story-827699235
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Mark-of-the-Obeast-A-Helluva-Boss-WG-Sequel-1-2-857061204
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Mark-of-the-Obeast-A-Helluva-Boss-WG-Sequel-2-2-857248884
>Two Whales: a WG/slob series about Max and Chloe from Life is Strange going into some VERY heavy slob shit
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Two-Whales-A-Life-is-Strange-Slob-Story-1-5-821392666
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Two-Whales-2-5-BBW-WG-light-slob-821468080
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Two-Whales-3-5-BBW-WG-slob-840910303
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Two-Whales-4-5-SSBBW-WG-extreme-slob-821399871
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Two-Whales-5-5-SSBBW-WG-extreme-slob-filth-821383331
>Merida's Royal Bounty: Princess Merida is fattened up by her mother to stop her from being so rebellious
https://www.deviantart.com/admiralakbar1/art/Merida-s-Royal-Bounty-BBW-WG-851850847
There's also a few greentexts I wrote on /trash/:
>The Dragon Awakens: Daenerys Targaryen transforms into a greedy, gluttonous dragon queen
https://sta.sh/0qokl28arap
https://sta.sh/02c8u79f0zku
>Totally Flies: Clover from Totally Spies is unable to reverse her Passion Patties weight gain and goes on spring break
https://sta.sh/0154fx911pvh
And some old short stories I posted here ages ago:
>a medieval king takes a peasant girl to be his mistress, but she uncovers a dark secret
https://sta.sh/0592cwo74nw
>a nun absorbs the sinfulness of those to whom she offers absolution
https://sta.sh/027qbcagv9nq
>an ancient Greek decides to corrupt a goddess for his own ends
https://sta.sh/01m2ruzt3yx6
>>1227
Just realized that I shilled those last three at the start of the morally depraved story thread. Oh well.
>>1266

That's a great start dude. I always love a good thin girl/fat girl pairing
I love your mass effect story and can't wait for the next part.

Only critique I have is that sometimes you leave out "the" every now and then within sentences
Hey all. I'm a huge fan of the request drabbles that MasterArchfiend does and wanted to start something similar. Its not fandom specific so feel free to comment whatever ideas you have. No promises on what I will or won't write. The size of the drabble will be dependent on how interested I am in the idea. Thanks and I can't wait to see your ideas.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/27896194
Shilling without an actual story being posted (or even ready) yet, but hey, that's how the hype works, right?

In case you filthy degenerates were worried if I finally kicked the bucket or went full normie with IRL stuff - fret not, I didn't.
In fact, after spending half a year secrelty drinking myself to death more or less every night, I decided to give my keyboard another run for its money.

Got a Mass Effect story coming out soon. Because there comes a time in every degenerate fatfic writer's carreer where they drop the pretense of civility, put their reproductive organs in charge, and go wild about feeding their waifus (or husbandos, I don't judge).

So, expect everyone's favourite buckethead Tali'Zorah to go off the deep end and gain a lot while trying (and failing) to deal with Shepard's passing. Also expect it to start off pretty damn dark (because wrapping wank material inside lame psychological drama was a good descision (sarcasm)) and plot-heavy (because I'm obsessed with setting things up in detail before they start to roll), with actual fun parts mostly near the end. If any of you ever read my stories, you know how I usually roll.

Why am I writing this shill? Because I've just done writing a very graphic sex scene for the story, and I feel like you should know.

Anyway, expect goodies soon.
>>1876
And god bless you for it. Great stuff.
Revving up the hype train again, because why the fuck not really. Also, I'm drunk again, sue me.

So I decided to experiment. Instead of writing something that follows my regular formula of "plot-heavy beginning - fun-heavy ending", I put myself to the challenge of keeping the plot to absolute barebones minimum while ramping up the fun as soon as possible and keeping it that way until the end.

Turns out, if I set out to put as much smut into as little words as possible, I can stuff a LOT of smut into my regular story length of 8k to 12k words.

So what should you be hyped up for, you might ask?

40k stuff again, because apparently I'm good at it. Pre-Fall Eldar - basically space elves who went off the deep end in search of ultimate ecstasy. Don't worry, you don't need to be a 40k nut to beat your meat off to that. A story about a cult devoted to fattening its members until they die. A girl gets it, first becomes a servant, then a feeder, then a feedee. Mutual gains included.

At 7k words now, near the end. Since I'm going about 1.5k words a day, should be complete in a couple of days. Stay tuned, my fellow degenerates! Goodies are coming!
>>1876
Yo, MasterArchfiend, I don´t know if you´re still following this thread, but I just want you to know that I still like and look foward for your stuff. It´s just that AO3 is not that great to look for WG stories to me, they´re kind of hard to find.
Not mine, but the author could use more encouragement.
>>1954

Oh? What do you use and are there any SU stories that I may have not read?
>>2063
Part 2 and 3 are out now.
Small shill, not going to post again
Expect 2 to 3 parts per week
>>2170
I thought you were Cooly for a second, he's the only one who really talks about Tokusatsu.
My second shill... I tend to write longish, plot-heavy stuff that can sometimes digress from fatty goodness, but my latest multi-parter happens to contain a ssbbw sex scene I'm pretty proud of.

Here's the sexy and nothing but the sexy: https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/The-Big-Box-6-877184223

And if you'd like to start at the beginning of the story: https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/The-Big-Box-1-877181296

Or the beginning of the series: https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/The-Big-Blow-Up-1-806929144
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You want more Azur Lane goodies? Of course you don't, you uncultured swines - but I brought them either way.

https://www.deviantart.com/m00nliner/art/Vacatio-Mari-Balticum-Azur-Lane-WG-Hipper-1-3-879865738
https://www.deviantart.com/m00nliner/art/Vacatio-Mari-Balticum-Azur-Lane-WG-Hipper-2-3-880063121
https://www.deviantart.com/m00nliner/art/Vacatio-Mari-Balticum-Azur-Lane-WG-Hipper-3-3-880220583

Skip first part if you don't want yet another unnecessarily long intro. Otherwise, enjoy at your own risk!
>>2286
Bravo sir, this has immediately become one of my all time favorites. I'm looking forward to your future work.
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I'm putting out a belly heavy, weight gain, forbidden romance novella. Pic relevant. It's the cover.

Blurb: "Everyone struggles with their weight from time to time. The newest chemistry teacher at the university, Annie Keller, is no different. While most of her students don't notice or care, one of her repeat students definitely has. Come on a journey of discovery as Ian learns how many cookies he can cook in a semester while finding out just how deep his professor's weight issues run."

The weight gain is aggressive in it. The rate definitely stretches the bounds of realism towards the end. Though it starts of pretty tame. You can read the first chapter here to get a feel for it: https://www.deviantart.com/juxtaterrestrial/art/Weighted-Grades-Chapter-1-3-days-left-to-order-882050318

You can order the book now, though it releases on July 1st: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0979H18LZ

help me bring weight gain to the normie market
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God,,,,,,, I wouldn't know where else to post this since most threads are dead here, and I guess this would be shilled soon.

Got myself h word monkey brain enough to conjure a concept for just a short story, horny, and fattening alike, y'know? Really thriving on “Helena who probably looks like she browses /fit/, feeds a heavy Dinah whilst also trying not to have her apartment torn down by a birdie's belches”

And I guess I really am posting here just to ask, what could I do to not have this a repetitive mess? Something to really not make this “she ate and went *BURRAOAP*” What would you perverted anons like to see, eh eh eh

I really don't write as much since they're all just horny drabbles, but I do want to push myself this time around, not too long, not too short.

And hell, got any more capeshit ladies in dire need of fattening, do give me concepts that'll be brought in a year.
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>>2580

The reason for the focus on Soma and Mina were born out of a desire for there to be expansion content for series or characters that were lacking in such like the aforementioned Castlevania series particularly the DS games.

I might either do a Blaster Master Zero story next or a Pokemon story that focuses on Alain and Aria from the X and Y anime.
>>2526
As for repetition, start an arc: Dinah starts empty, maybe not even hungry before Helena tempts her, teases her into appetisers she then stuffs her with the main course. Post up what you got.
>>2443
always love your content!
Under the Cherry Blossoms:

https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/Under-the-Cherry-Blossoms-885120580

A one off date between Radical DG2's sumo sized Cho and business savy (and far thinner) Fukiko as a couple.

Persumo Part 12:

https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/Persumo-Part-12-885717458

Part 13 is up on my Ko-Fi page btw.

https://ko-fi.com/post/Persumo-13-V7V45D98Z

Sumo Moon part 3:

https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/Sumo-Moon-Part-3-886100186

aka Bob makes even more of a hash of Sailor Moon canon then he has already. ;)

Korra and Co's Swollen Suit Sequel: Suit inflation RP I did with a friend, now uploaded in full.

https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/Korra-and-Co-s-Swollen-Suit-Sequel-full-story-885930501

Elincia the Rotund...needs Rescuing: Fire Emblem AU in a series of AUs staring a massive matron sized Elincia Ridell Crimea being kidnapped and stuffed against her will.

https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/Elincia-the-Rotund-needs-Rescuing-886102660

Post Pandemic Plumpness: One shot staring some one and done female OCs done with a sort of frasier like vibe (still need to go back and fix this one up grammarically speaking). Aka Bob Gets Topical (for a given value of Topical)

https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/Post-Pandemic-Plumpness-full-story-886108139
>>2652
you write good shit, icebro
keep it up
>>2695
kino. best writer out there imo
>>2792
Thats really great. Hope to see more from you
>>2912
Thanks. I'm currently writing part 2 and have a lot of ideas for other fics.
>>3140
It's good, just wish it focused more on Niffty getting fat.
>>609
Wow,
In one year you're already the best writer on DA.
Amazing job bro
>>3163
Ayy, thanks!
It's really cool to look back on my old stuff and mark the improvement.
Anyone else write stories to help yourself understand why you like something better? I've written a few short stories with my favorite having a guy dress his bbw gf.
I hate that I can't perfectly communicate that image in words so no shill from me.
>>3207

I try to do that with some of my stories. I find it tends to make my stories stronger since it pushes me to develop other characters beyond whatever narrative role they're meant to serve in the plot (which consequently makes stories harder to write, but that's kind of the point I guess).
https://www.deviantart.com/bob-dude/art/SR-Season-2-ep-3-897565395 Third ep of Sumo Ranger season 2 is finally up on DA.

And I've got some new stuff on Ko-Fi.

A power rangers inflation one shot: https://ko-fi.com/post/Spherical-Patrol-Delta-W7W66XLLL

A Danny Phantom AU one shot: https://ko-fi.com/post/Shes-a-Phat-Phantom-A-Jazz-Fenton-AU-M4M76WXG2

So immobility fat girlness. https://ko-fi.com/post/One-shot-The-Impossibility-of-Immobility-X8X46SE3L

And a suit/body inflation story staring superhero OCs. https://ko-fi.com/post/Battle-Blimp-and-the-Pumpkin-Princess-P5P86STDB

Also got two subscription tiers up on DA now so if you're not comfortable with Ko-Fi, there's something straight from the source there.
>>3154
This was a very good read. Hope there's more to come.
>>3154
Great stuff — I really love the format. Hard to find a new and unique way into this stuff and you managed it, bravo.
>>3369
I haven't taken a look but I can already tell you that you're doing it wrong
>>3370
That's why I'm here. I needed that 2nd perspective that you don't usually get from comments.
>>3371

You've misunderstood. I have not taken a look yet but I plan to soon.

What I said earlier was be yourself. As in don't be a youtuber.
>>3373
Oh, sorry there.

My focus flipped a lot so I guess I'm still trying to get a feel for what I like the most. At least I have a few ideas of what I don't want to do.
>>3374
Good. Bad examples are useful once in a while. I wouldn't ever say they are efficient; I prefer the alternative but good luck in finding perfection. Today's mess of a world is not conducive to inspiration. Too bad you're a learning artist.

Hopefully you'll learn to get clever. Then that day you too can give a big fuck you to those filthy youtuber niggers and their democratic party patreons whereas before you could not. Fuck china and the democrats' nwo agenda
>>3376
Yeah. I'm still relatively new to the scene, but it doesn't mean I should wait to get a 2nd perspective. I think a mix of success and failure is needed to grow myself.
Like the stories I posted above, I like very different parts of each and I want to figure out what the weaker parts are and what the stronger parts are.
Oh you wrote those
>>3405
I fucking love your Azur Lane works, this game doesn't get nearly enough WG stories.
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Here are the two Little Witch Academia fics I did for the general thread on /bbwdraw/. Figured they'd belong here too. I don't have anywhere else to shill but you can catch me in that thread if you have anything to add/request/suggest
>>3398
Amazing work, as usual.

Shameless question: Will you ever release in DA you Ko-Fi works, like Azula´s Competition? Or is it permanently paid only?
>>3437

Great question! I do release Ko-Fi and Patreon DA. My general goal is to put 1 story and 1 preview out per month.
This is a short one based off a freeware horror game called Lily’s Well, this is about a spoiler character so I recommend playing the game before.

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Short-Lily-s-Swell-903762046

This one focuses on Ann and Ryuji and is based off two animations from Thirdian and Imbapovi respectively.

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Persona-5-Ann-quadyne-Ga-Ryuji-902241018

Not really proud of how the Persona 5 story turned out and went back to edit it.

Feedback is appreciated.
I've never posted my stories here before. They mostly focus on weight gain and Mother/Daughter incest, where either the mother or daughter is a futa. Lots of sex.

Mother for Daughter (weight Gain, Mother/daughter incest, Futa)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/21865915/chapters/52188496

Mom makes me fat (Weight Gain, Mother/Daughter Incest, Futa. Addiction, Cock Sucking)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/38141767

Donnie's Mommy (Weight Gain, Mother/Son Incest, Feminization, Futa, Drugs, Breast Growth, Cum Swallowing)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/21878026/chapters/52219753
Pretty new to this whole kink writing scene, but I wanted to share my first real stories and maybe get some feedback.

This is a two part inflation/weight gain story set in the Super Smash Bros universe. It’s pretty long, and more focused on narrative than erotica, but I think it’s worth some merit.

https://www.deviantart.com/testsubject8008/art/Spirits-are-Cheating-Palutena-Part-1-2-908955588

https://www.deviantart.com/testsubject8008/art/Spirits-are-Cheating-Palutena-Part-2-2-908974181
I’m back!

Here’s the first in what will hopefully be a multi-part series detailing Persona 5’s Haru Okumura subconsciously kickstarting a city-wide Weight Gain epidemic. Future parts will show the Phantom Thieves as they pinpoint the cause of this attack on waistlines, but will they escape from the adipose unscathed? Probably not, but it’s fun to be idealistic sometimes.

https://www.deviantart.com/testsubject8008/art/Pudgesona-Prologue-Enter-the-Space-Empress-916728145
>>15 (OP)
The website would do well with a seach function.
>>4303

This is extremely well-written, and I say this even tho lit often doesn't hold my attention, would love to see more from you!
I've started a new series based on an excellent comic by CrossCresent about May from Pokemon. I have no attachment to Pokemon as a franchise, but I just loved the way he drew her belly and gave her a rather unique pathway to gain through.

I'm envisioning 10-15 parts and am maybe 50% of the way through writing it. The prologue is here: https://www.deviantart.com/generic725/art/It-s-Just-Bloating-Prologue-918509909

And then I also released an unfinsihed piece I hope to get back to about a woman with a possibly magical tattoo that leads to interesting impacts on her friends: https://www.deviantart.com/generic725/art/Tattoo-Troubles-UNFINISHED-919587214
>>4340

What a fag. (Generic is right)
>>4367
Always good to see a fellow whovian in the FA community.
Hey! I’ve just put out the first part of a kidnapping and slob story on deviantart. I kind of want to gauge interest and get some feedback before continuing just so I’m not wasting my time. I really enjoyed writing it and I hope you enjoy it too!
https://www.deviantart.com/paxasnax/art/Amy-Day-1-922005101
>>4510
Keep going! Great start
Back at it again with a Castlevania story to celebrate the 1-year anniversary of my first story, Castlevania: Fruits of Sorrow. It's a pack of short stories. The first two take place directly after Fruits of Sorrow before going to another timeline where Soma and Mina have an explosive end before going back to the main timeline to a preview for a sequel to Fruits of Sorrow.

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Shorts-Story-Pack-Fruits-of-Sorrow-Follow-Up-893709697
First story published! Looking for feedback and gauging interest to see if people want a more fleshed out story. This short story deals with typical college weight gain. It only focuses on one girl, Brielle, but I've got character concepts and journeys for her 3 roommates as well and figured I'd write a short story before delving into a giant multi-episode series

https://www.deviantart.com/misterdreavuss/art/College-is-Liberating-for-Women-and-Waists-923726594
Not exactly sure if I'm supposed to put this here or on the writefags thread. I've not posted anything ever and thus its the first thing I've taken seriously. It's a little story about focusing on Chie from persona 4 somehow bodyswapping with a much much fatter version of herself. Surrounded by some very doting friends Taking obvious inspiration from that one weeb lord story.

The story isn't finished and ends extremely abruptly. I'm more or less just looking for feedback and trying to find out if I should keep going with this. Thanks in advance even one comment would mean a lot.
https://pastebin.com/vvHVQLQb
Oneswallowtoomany
Newbie to shill here, but I've almost completed a fairly large story about a perennially skinny glutton whose metabolism finally cracks and starts to get fat. Working in investment, she begins to realize that there's a huge opportunity here if she can build the right kind of approach. So, she and friends create Lipid, a first-of-it-kinds venture capital fund investing in obesity-related technology. The story floats around several increasing large characters and ever-fatter locations as they look to build out their approach and change how the world views its ever-expanding wasitlines. https://www.deviantart.com/generic725/gallery/83400064/it-s-just-bloating
It's been a while since I've shared my Totally Spies Fanfic, New Passion Patties.

The three spies are finally on a mission... some of which have packed on a few pounds. Will the weight effect their performance? Find out in the latest chapter!

https://www.deviantart.com/i-am-18-i-swear/art/New-Passion-Patties-Ch-28-Chasing-Handsome-Kyle-929950360

If that doesnt tickle your fancy, then I have short story to share that will have a continuation.

"It's an Allergy!"

What if you had a unusual reaction to spicy food? Poor Valerie does... and it involves lot's of weight gain.

https://www.deviantart.com/i-am-18-i-swear/art/BBW-WG-It-s-An-Allergy-A-Short-Story-Prompt-924373612
I've posted these in another thread but I figured reposting them here would be a good idea.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/37161559
>Spamton NEO from Deltarune (post pacifist), greentext format, male weight gain/weight loss, emotional eating, binge eating, minor health issues, drama
https://archiveofourown.org/works/39165138/chapters/98262675
>Spamton (Addison/AU), prose format, male weight gain/weight loss, failed/successful dieting, mild groping, emotional eating, binge eating, drama
https://archiveofourown.org/works/41580918/chapters/104293053
>Spamton (Addison/AU), femAnon, greentext format, male and female weight gain/weight loss, role reversal, emotional eating, binge eating, minor hedonism, mild groping, romance with some drama
The third one is based on the second.
Comments and critiques welcome!
>>5111
I really enjoyed this. I wish it was longer! I hope you write and post more
DA ain't gonna let me post stories as gross as I write em anymore, so here:

https://at.tumblr.com/slobbybowst/generic-fat-and-slobby-taco-bell-scenario/wzuthvs8b3cm

Massive, maximumly gross girl shows off in a taco bell

https://at.tumblr.com/slobbybowst/burden-of-wiping/v918tznxmzry

First person story about burdening others with the task of wiping a fat slobby ass

https://at.tumblr.com/slobbybowst/the-date/spi9jpde26mz

FFA meets the fat slob boy of her dreams and has the best date she could hope for
Posting this on here because Zerpz is deactivating their DA account

Warning, the following is a fetish work. All character depicted are 18+
Contains: Female Weight Gain, Sweat, Slight Heavy Breathing, Sumo Transformation
Series: Persona 3

"My, my... I believe this outfit looks rather striking on me, wouldn't you say?"

Elizabeth laughed, causing her enormous belly to wobble like jello from beneath the plain, dark blue leotard she had somehow managed to cram her bloated form into without significant incident. It fit, but just barely, leaving little to the imagination as it tightly hugged the oversized elevator attendant's amorphous form, revealing each and every roll, divot, dimple, and fold of the woman's flesh in excruciating detail as it's fabric as stretched across her body's vast expanse. Reaching down towards her own jutting waistline, the Velvet Room's hostess could help but grin as she tightened her seemingly custom-made mawashi between her blobby fingertips, completing her look. She elicited a slight moan from herself as the silk garment tugged at all the right places, digging into her swollen hips, cavernous ass crack, and overgrown, multi-rolled fupa.

"Impressive, no?" Elizabeth beamed, letting a mattress-sized sheet of lard sag down from her encumbered arm as she reached up and pressed a hand into the damp depths of one of the many folds between her chins. "So... what do you think?" She asked, impatient curiosity bubbling from the depths of her buried throat as she shifted her attention towards her companion. She eyed him eagerly, drool beginning to drip from the corner of her mouth as she awaited his response.

Minato bit his lip, unsure how to react as the tremendously overweight woman that sat in front of him giggled with glee from having managed to stuff herself in an outfit that resembled that of a sumo wrestler. His eyes danced across her body, taking in the sweat-coated view as his brain raced to formulate a response to her query. Her immensely overfed midsection caught his attention first, its mountainous mass still fully visible, even despite the sportswear that clung to it, as it oozed haplessly across the mat-covered floors. Sections of the aforementioned outfit were splotched with misshapen spots, spots darker in colour than the rest of its fabric, likely a result of the constant stream of perspiration dripping from the pores of a woman her size. A wrinkled, blue loincloth had somehow managed to escape from the dark underside of her gargantuan gut, revealing that a solid gold copy of the Velvet Room's insignia had been sewn into the glorified sweat rag as it rolled out across the floor.

Looking for traces of the rest of the accessory, Minato's focus shifted towards her tanker-sized legs, zeroing in on the twisted belt that encircled her formless, dimpled thighs, their shape defined by little else than the few, thick rolls they consisted of. Though her stomach had swallowed most of it to the front of her, portions of the band could be seen towards her sides, so long as they had not been sucked into her ever blimping love handles. Clattering against globs of pure, cellulite-coated lard, there were golden accessories that hung from its sides, resembling symbols relating to the Velvet Room's many fusion rituals. Just above her waist laid her sagging, engorged breasts, each far too heavy to support their own size and sloping downwards across the globe of her belly as a result. Minato bushed as he realized that she had been unable to fit one of her custom-built bras beneath her newest costume, noticing how blatantly visible her shockingly puffy areolas were from underneath the uniform. Noticing her master's embarrassment, Elizabeth broke the awkward silence between the two by clearing her throat, staring at the boy with joy as he turned his head back towards her blobby face.

"I'll take your silence as an admission that you find this nearly as stunning as I do." Elizabeth chuckled, giving her stomach a hard, booming slap for emphasis. "After all, though I do believe that I may be just the smallest bit larger than these... "sumo wrestlers" you've spoken of, it's hard not to be in awe of someone as strong as I." She boasted, brimming with confidence. As if to demonstrate said strength, Elizabeth hastily began to lift up her swollen left leg, revealing her elephantine foot to Minato with a wiggle of her toes, as well as her gigantic arms, letting out a mighty grunt as she attempted to imitate the act of stepping into the ring. Slamming her mass down with great speed, the entire Velvet Room began to shake, shuddering along with Elizabeth's own flesh as it began to creak in response to her sudden show of force. With a pained huff she repeated the process, only now with her right side, leaving Minato fearful of the ceiling collapsing in on them both as she stomped against the ground for a second time, jostling the room even worse than the first time.

"I trust... huff... that will suffice as... haahh... substantial proof for my claims?" Elizabeth huffed, clutching at her chest as she struggled to regain her suddenly lost breath, her face flushing red from exhaustion. Wondering if there was truly anything that had needed to be proven to begin with in the first place, Minato nodded his head swiftly, hoping the reassure the woman in the off-handed chance that it would prevent her from suddenly collapsing forward and on top of him. "That's... huff... good." Elizabeth puffed, her chins squishing against each other as she nodded in like-minded agreement.

"Still... ngh... I must wonder..." Elizabeth grunted, steadily regaining her composure as her breathing steadied. "What is the meaning of the Velvet Room changing to such a form? Who was the one to leave this wonderful clothing for me to find?" She asked, breathlessly taking in the sights of the bizarre, remarkably blue wrestling den the Velvet Room had transformed into since her and Minato's last visit. "And if the room has truly become one of those spectacular rings that men enter to partake in sportsman-like competition... where is my opponent?" The woman wondered, glancing at the empty metal bleachers that surrounded the space, then at the various suspended spotlights that illuminated the entire area, and finally back towards the enormous arena, unmistakably marked with the signature symbol of the Velvet Room, at its center.

"I suppose I shall investigate!" Elizabeth exclaimed, twisting her flabby body around with the turn of her cankle-covered, swollen heels. The sudden momentum caused her body to wobble wildly, leaving every inch of her overgrown figure to slosh and slap against itself as she snapped back into place. Watching as she began to trudge off towards the back of the room, Mintato's eyes bulged as her misshaped, fully exposed backside began to come into view. Though her bodysuit had seemed to sufficiently maintain her modesty from the front, her rear end was left anything but. The majority of its spandex wedged tightly in between her ass cheeks, Elizabeth's bottom was left fully exposed, each dimpled, cottage cheese-like glob of fat jiggling like mad as she waddled along. They smashed together upon occasion, clapping loudly as flesh clashed against flesh, worsening her wedgie even further in the process each and every time. Just above them rested her many, rolling hills of back lard, each roll stacking up upon itself to form a tiered mass of blubber and grease. Each layer jiggled more than the last as she walked, sloshing softy together in an almost rhythmic fashion as she moved along her way. Though they were fully covered, unlike her behind, her belly had stretched her ill-fitting spandex to its limit, leaving the leotard nearly transparent near her body's tail end.

"Aha! I think I've found something!" Elizabeth cried, nearly falling over as she suddenly leaned forward to the best of her ability, extending her oversized arms outward in an attempt to reach whatever it was she had found. "This might answer at least... nggh... one of our questions!" She noted, haplessly unaware of how far her ass had begun to stick out into the air behind her as she grunted and groaned loudly, nearly squealing like a hog from her own excitement. "Got it!" She pronounced triumphantly, balling up what she had found between her doughy hands and standing back up, her knees creaking from the excess strain she had suddenly thrust back upon them.

"Surprise!" Elizabeth smiled. twirling around and uncrumpling a second mawashi she had found, slowly revealing it to Minato. It was massively oversized, nearly identically to her own in shape, though its colours and design were different, almost resembling Gekkoukan High School uniform with how it was themed. It's loincloth rolled out as she finished unveiling it fully, revealing what appeared to be S.E.E.S.'s logo as its central design, rather than the Velvet Room's symbol. Realizing what this meant, Minato couldn't help but gulp.

"I think I've found my opponent... hm... but I don't think you're quite there yet." Elizabeth frowned, her excitement melting to lament as she looked down at towards the ground at the scrawny boy stood in front of her. "So skinny... but I think we can fix that." She realized, outstretching the outfit as she slowly began to resume her waddle, ominously stomping her feet against the floor with each step as a grin crept away across her fatty face. "How does becoming my apprentice sound?" She offered, nearly backing Minato into a corner as she pushed her bulk forward. Pausing for a moment, he simply shrugged his shoulders, sighed, and resigned himself to his fate, knowing full well that Elizabeth of all people wasn't likely to take no for an answer.
>>5193
Loved the first part, but the second part got a bit too dense for me. I liked the format of "last I heard, they´re even fatter" at first, but it´s starting to feel like a lot of teasing with no payout.
Also you did a whole chapter on the Scarlet Devil Manor, and best girl Hong Meiling was mentioned only once. That´s a serious issue I hope will be addressed in the future.
But beyonde that, it´s going pretty well. Looking foward for the rest.
Here to shill my first fatfic novel, that I started posting on Monday:

https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/The-Big-Bottom-Line-1-940789542

It's what I've dubbed "BBW Noir," featuring a first-person FA detective trying to solve multiple mysteries. It has a lot of plot and many side characters in it but also a lot of fat ladies, particularly ones with giant asses.
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>>5449
https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Shenmue-Inflation-Chapter-2-Widening-Wuying-924200985
https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Yo-Kai-Watch-Berried-Couple-939368510
https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Castlevania-Shorts-Expansion-of-Sorrow-888570298

Some more stories from me. Did a second part to the Shenmue story that I shared, a Yo-Kai Watch story for a friend focusing on Nate and Katie as adults, and two Castlevania shorts I slept on before deciding to post.
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>>5798
https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Spider-Man-and-his-Flexible-Friends-928281966

Here's my last story for 2022. It's a Spider-Man story that has some elasticity and flattening fetish alongside the main attraction that is body inflation.

Peter, Mary Jane, and Harry get elastic powers after inhaling some gas that activate after they're crushed by crates. Mary Jane decides to inflate the three in order to have a good time.

Also the three use their designs from the 2017 Spider-Man show since regardless of the show's overall quality, I like how they look there, especially Harry.
>>5911
Your shit is excellent. Keep it up man
>>5875

Loved this one! I normally don't go in for reality warp stories. I like the shame, the progression, the shock when people they know see them fatter, etc. But for some reason this particular story does a great job of it, possibly because there is still teasing and shame at every stage.

My only problem is that I then checked the rest of your gallery, and it's the only story!
I've shilled here before but it's been a minute so here we go... Late last year I wrote a novel-length entry in my ongoing Shiva Shapiro FA PI series, The Big Bottom Line. It's the longest, most challenging thing I've written and I'm proud of it.

Fair warning, there's a lot of plot and many of the women are of MILF/GILF age. The good news is that many of these women also have gigantic asses and the plot includes a lot of action and suspense. Just saying it's not for everyone.

https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/The-Big-Bottom-Line-1-940789542
>>6595
I'm all for it, just haven't been inspired yet. Also the setting is semi-realistic and it's hard trying to wrap my head around the logistics a 500+ lb pregnant woman. Or maybe I should just go off the rails and make it surreal-speculative.
>>6604
>>6605

MrWrong1 one of the GOATs

What's a reader gotta do to convince you to add some contrast to your stories? I'd kill for a skinny chick character to interact with your cast of fat ladies
>>6604
You beautiful bastard i read the whole thing but only favourited select chapters. Wanted to write a longer piece of feedback but never got around to it. Greatly enjoyed it with a few outliers. You managed to endear me to a woman who defends rapists in court
>>6612
Wow, thank you!!! And you're 100% right, the contrast thing is a big blind spot for me even though I enjoy it myself. (I'm a greedy FA, always the more the merrier.) You're not the first to mention it and I'll try to right that ship in my next outing.

>>6616
Thanks for reading and faving! I do love comments, especially long ones, but the view numbers alone tell me I wasn't just writing for myself which is enough.

And I'm sorry about Emily, who not only defends rapists but child rapists, oops. But you know me, I can't stand to give the reader a purely pleasurable experience lol.
>>6627
You favourited one of my stories the other day which was a big surprise, thanks. Been reading your stuff for a really long time now, think one of the first users I followed on DA. I don't have the patience to write big multipart stories like you have! I end up getting distracted by new ideas too quickly.
>>6629
Wish I knew who you were so I can read more! But I do understand keeping strict anonymity here in the bbw-chan badlands.

FWIW, it took me many years before I completed a story of any length, much less an epic. It also helped that I ramped up to it with a bunch of shorter stories, where I was already invested in the characters and their universe.
>>6627
i could fix her.
>>6666
I think he's doing a meme reference lol.
I'm just starting up on this whole writing thing, so here are the weight gain fics that I've written. Done a few different kinks but just gonna post the fat ones. Ideally I'd like some feedback because I'm not really getting any from the comments.

https://www.deviantart.com/bibbidyboobidy/art/Pit-and-Viridi-Get-Pranked-948018472 (Has mutual weight gain, beware.)
https://www.deviantart.com/bibbidyboobidy/art/Viridi-s-revenge-950042351 (Sequel to that one, this time has some squashing)

https://www.deviantart.com/bibbidyboobidy/art/Samus-Gigantic-Adventure-953941500 (Female weight gain, giantess, and tomfoolery stuckage.)

https://www.deviantart.com/bibbidyboobidy/art/Makoto-s-Delicious-Despair-954521207 (Extreme male weight gain, size contrast, and a little bit of silly mind stuff)

Any sort of feedback would be appreciated, thanks!
>>6833

I find your stories extremely hard to read with how you (don't) break up your paragraphs. It's repeated walls of text. Most style guides will, for good reason, recommend breaking up dialogue into separate paragraphs at a minimum. E.g., https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/how-to-use-paragraph-breaks/

There's also quite a few awkward word choices, e.g., "taken confused", and some grammatical issues here and there (e.g., it's "affected" not "effected"). You repeat phrases, e.g., one sentence uses "spoke up" twice which hampers the flow of the prose. Not as big of a deal as the other ones, but capitalization issues are frequent, as well.

I could go into more detail, but I'd work on polishing up your fundamentals before trying to work on broader strokes.
>>6861
Oh damn this is good. How far out is Part 2?
>>6862
Thank you, I woke up this morning and wrote almost all of it. I think I'll edit in chunks and release 3 parts total. Not sure when I'll release them.
>>6925
This is really good! I've created a couple of peril threads in this board with little to no response, so it's great to finally see a writer who also loves peril stories. Looking forward to the mermaid story; that is an underrated premise.
>>6934
Thanks! I've seen the peril threads here before. I think I might have posted in them but there isn't really much out there to share unfortunately. I began writing so I could give out the kind of content that I like, hopefully I can inspire people to write their own. The mermaid one is in the early stages, I'm finding it a bit difficult to write and I don't want to let people down so it might be a while still.
Hi everyone.

I’d like to share some of my writing with you guys.

I don't write much, but I may consider requests if they interest me.

This is a requested story I wrote recently about a lawyer with a curse that causes her to gain weight every time she lies. Includes elements of rapid weight gain/inflation. Titled The Curse of the Swelling Tongue.

https://www.deviantart.com/fattenherup/art/Request-The-Curse-of-the-Swelling-Tongue-943636008

I hope you like it. Let me know if you’d like more.
I just posted my first story on DA. It's really short, kind of just testing the waters to see how it goes.

https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Reflection-963592395

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. I have a lot of ideas for bigger and better stuff, but I felt like I just needed to get something fairly short and simple out before trying to write something big.
>>7194 (Cross-thread)
I can't speak for others, but one of the appeals is locking these young ladies into a certain life style
Hey guys, I have two more stories since the last time I posted here.

This one is pretty short, like my first story. But instead of dealing with regret, the main character regrets nothing and chooses to go even further in her weight gain journey.

https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Four-Digits-964947365

This one's a bit longer, it's about a woman who has a health scare and ends up in the hospital. Fortunately, her girlfriend brings her some food to lift her spirits.

https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Hospital-Stay-965857559

Like always, feedback is appreciated. I've gotten a lot of positive feedback so far, and I'm really grateful for anyone who actually reads this stuff!
>>7219
Really enjoyed this, it has heart to it.
>>7217
I'm a huge fan of the themes you explore. I would love to see you tackle a longer story someday.

>>7219
I really like how you describe the mobility struggles in detail. I also liked the parts where you described Gabby's dynamic with the school. I'm a big fan of "realistic" high school settings so I hope you'll write more in this genre in the future.
>>7220
Thank you, I really appreciate that. I guess I can still tap into my teenaged alienation, for better or worse lol.

>>7222
Thanks — I'm glad you enjoyed it! Based on real, overheard, and invented experiences.

TBH I'm not sure if/when I'll revisit high school. It's very tricky with underaged characters in a fetish context, even when there's no sex or fetish stuff per se. Especially when it's realistic (or semi-realistic, in this case). That's why this one was on the shelf for a while, unfinished. But re-reading I felt like the truth of it overrode the ick factor.
>>7222
Thanks so much, I appreciate the feedback! I'm definitely most comfortable with shorter stories, but I have some ideas that'll definitely run a bit longer. I'll get there eventually, it's just a matter of fleshing those ideas out some more. Thanks again for reading!
>>7294
Man, I would really love to see Christie help Kimmy move around or help as a caretaker, and find herself oddly fascinated by Kimmy's obesity related struggles...
>>7299
Thanks for reading! I intend to do a sequel at some point, maybe I can incorporate something like that in there. The only thing I know for sure is that Christie will get bigger, whether intentionally or not.
Searching for a story on DeviantArt, was about plump princess and Jenni bombshell eating a gummy worm or bear and growing
Longtime frequenter of these forums, and just started writing stories this summer. They're a bit of a mix and match synopsis-wise but usually involve at least one ditzy young woman gaining a ton of weight. I also play around with a connected universe between all of them.

https://www.deviantart.com/bratwurstguy
Clown weight gain, looking for feedback, not entirely finished

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"We need a new fat lady"

The circus staff were in a pinch. 'Gloria the ham planet' had retired when one of the audience asked her hand in marriage. The suitor, a rich architect, hauled her away with a forklift, and now their main attraction was gone. They began looking for a replacement, but finding an 700+ pound woman turned out to be harder than initially thought. Their latest lead, a surly but acceptable candidate, had decided to go with Dove soaps instead. They were running out of time before the next show.

"We could just make one, you know"

The staff looked over at Glibby the clown. His gaze was distant, and he took a draw from his cigarette. "Ashley, probably." Glibby met the Circus director's gaze, who started to nod. "Do you think you could convince her? It's not entirely fair to her, even if she does owe us some money" Glibby smiled at that remark. "We all play our parts in this society we live in" He said, stamping out his smoke.

...

Ashley the clown had agreed to Glibby's deal, play her part in a big "balloon" show, and her debt to the circus would be erased. Ecstatic at the offer, she had agreed. One night of being a balloon, that's all it took. The exact details, the head clown had been sparse. The circus had proceeded as usual, the beast masters and acrobats had done their usual routine; soon the clowns would be next. In the backrooms, Ash adjusted her corset and skirt, they were tighter on her as of late. She hoped none of the other clowns noticed her weight gain, but they were busy getting dressed themselves. "Ready for tonight?" Glibby appeared at her side. Ash turned and nodded, sticking on her fake red nose, smiling. "If you're good at something, never do it for free. That's what you told me, right?" Glibby looked at her cute face, painted white with dyed pink hair on top, and felt a pang of guilt. A speaker boomed from beyond the curtains, "AND NOW, THE CLOWNS!" The time was past for second thoughts.

The goofballs boiled out of the slit, cartwheeling, somersaulting, and got up to their usual gags. Playing jokes on each other, tripping each other, but the audience was getting restless. Glibby eyed the audience sidelong, noticing bored gazes, arms crossed. They were waiting for the fat lady. Glibby looked over and met the Circus director's gaze, both nodding at each other. The time was now.

Ashley had finished tying a particularly large elephant balloon, and gave it to a small boy. "You're pudgy" he giggled, pointing to her stomach. Ash frowned, lips pouting. She hadn't expected a child to call out her physique so suddenly; it wasn't her fault she was so hungry recently. A retort began to form, her mouth opening, before gasping in surprise as 4 clowns grabbed her limbs. "W-hat?" she asked, but this must have been part of the "balloon gag" Glibby had in mind. She went along with it, feigning surprise and shock. Being brought to the center of the arena, she was placed in a chair. A large barrel was rolled in, as other clowns tied her hands and ankles to the chair. The first bout of confusion hit Ash, what were they going to blow her up with? Gibby walked over with microphone, and a hose from the barrel.

"Ladies and Gentleman, as you know, Gloria, our beloved Venus of excess, has left us. She will be sorely missed, but I am pleased to announce, that we have another candidate. Please welcome, ASHLEY!!"

The crowd erupted in applause. Too loud, too giddy to notice Ashley protesting. "W-wait, this isn't what you said, you said I would be a balloon!"

A glint appeared in Gibby's bloodshot eyes as he looked down, pulling the mic away. "I didn't lie. You will be a balloon. Never said what type" He thrust the hose into her mouth, other clowns fixing some straps to the back of her head to keep it in place. They lifted the barrel above her, and a sloshing made the hose attached wiggle; Ashley squirming as she waited for the inevitable. A creamy liquid hit her mouth, her cheeks bulging until she inevitably swallowed.

"Sorry love, we needed a new fat lady. That mixture is heavy cream, with a good amount of weight gain powder and molasses to help"

Ashley groaned as she kept gulping the mixture. At first, her corset held tight. It bulged slightly, but the fattening mixture had started to digest. Her arms felt thicker, her thighs rubbed up a bit more. The stream of the mixture was relentless though, and pain came from her stomach. A ripping noise emerged, drawing Ashley's eyes down. A muffintop was forming, creamy flesh rising out beneath the ripping corset. She kept swallowing, her belly kept getting bigger, pulling the corset apart more and more until...BANG

The clowness groaned in pleasure and relief, her paunch free. It was large and soft, rolls had began to develop between her belly button. Her armpits began to feel pinched, and she looked down at her arms. Bingowings were forming, she was always a bit chubby, but now she was downright fat. The widening lovehandles bulged against the side of the chair. Still though, she had to keep swallowing. Soon the barrel would be empty.

The crowd had quieted down, and a noise emanated from Ash. Gurgling and groaning came from her stomach as she whimpered. Her asscheeks felt stuck as they expanded from under the chair back, and her stomach had almost reached to her knees. It was getting harder to look down, the double chin that had grew obscuring her neck movement. A creaking noise came from the chair; she was outgrowing it. Wood snapped, unable to contain the bean bag body, and Ashely plopped down on her back in an earthquake of jiggling. The barrel was empty, and Ashley signed internally, the ordeal was over. She tried to stand up, but found her body unable to cope with the new weight. The only result from her efforts were more jiggling. The rational part of her brain surmised she must have been at 600 pounds.

Minor clapping came from the crowd, before Glibby stepped forward again with the mic. "Oh, you thought we were done? AU CONTRAIRE! BRING IN THE TRUCK," he waved. A rumbling 18-wheeler silo truck backed into the arena, the crowd going wild all over again. Eyes bulging, Ashely redoubled her squirming efforts, but just producing more turbulent wobbles. The hose was hooked up to the silo, and a pump started up.

"Mmpmh, MMMPPMHMPH"

The stream had higher pressure than the barrel did, and Ashley began to blow up from the excess calories. Arms began to rise as her haunches expanded, folds of fat deepening from the wave of flab. Ash felt a wedgie in her ass, as each cheek kept flowing backwards, and and her face puffed up, further obstructing her vision. Her breasts, now the size of basketballs, drooped down to her side, nipples hardening and pressurizing. Biggest of all though, was her stomach.

From the crowd's point of view, it resembled nothing more than some dough filled beanbags. A navel deepened in between the upper and bottom folds of her stomach. Arms rising and becoming more cone-shaped, Ashley felt a curious sensation of being elevated. Her back was getting so fat that she was rising off the ground. As she attempted to protest, the cream still pumping, she sloshed back and forth, bigger. Passing the size of a large pick-up truck, her stomach rumbled more. The audience began cheering and whooping once more.

"Seems our Ashley is having some indigestion issues! My colleagues, let's assist her" Glibby spoke to the mic. A couple clowns climbed up on her protruding stomach, and began doing jumping jacks. It was curiously pleasant to Ash, as they kneaded her dough. They climbed off, as an acrobat flung from a high swing down onto her stomach. A large divet formed at his impact, and Ashley's eyes bulged. The creamy flesh rebounded, launching the acrobat back into the air 30 feet where we spun in the air, until back down. Swallow, swallow, swallow. Her waist and lovehandles rolled across the dirt. The straps at the back of the hose snapped off, and freedom beckoned. Ashely attempted to spit the hose out, but found it stuck in place by her fat face cheeks, two grape-fruit sized dough bags

"Ladies and gentleman," she heard glibby say, "now the cannon!" Cannon? She attempted to look left and right, but her neck had wedged her head still.

From across the stadium, a clown climbed into a tube. It boomed, the clown flailing in the air, aimed towards her stomach. Aimed perhaps a little TOO well. He landed face first into her belly button, a sphincter roughly 4 feet deep. A wave of sloshing and jiggles came from the stomach, the clown squirming and trying to pull himself out. It was to no avail. The stomach kept bulging, sucking him deeper and deeper until his feet were submerged by the blob.
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>>6954
Made 5 more stories

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Castlevania-Juicy-Harmony-of-Sweet-Degeneracy-896520838
This one is a sequel to both Fruits of Sorrow and Portrait of Succulence. I meant to release it in July as to coincide with Juicy July and the second anniversary of Fruits of Sorrow but I had writers block

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Pokemon-Falkner-s-Flight-Now-With-Friends-977576256
Second one is based off an image that Manpersonguy (An artist I follow) did of Falkner from Pokemon. Originally posted a WIP for the guy's birthday but I managed to finish it up and have Bugsy, Morty, and Whitney

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Blow-Fu-Kozo-Yo-Kai-Watch-Drabble-990760428
This one is a short drabble with the mom from Yo-Kai Watch, Lily Adams, transforming into a balloon. It's kind of a bad end scenario but not really

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Persona-5-Shujin-s-Massive-Moons-894127331
This one is a Persona 5 story where Mishima and Shiho (Two underinflated characters) decide to inflate together after discovering the other's fetish.

https://www.deviantart.com/kirbutt50/art/Persona-5-Prelude-to-the-Phantom-Toys-883516235
This one is the first part of a two part story where the Phantom Thieves (Along with outside members like Mishima, Shiho, Hifumi, and Persona 3's Ken) find themselves in what seems to be a palace that turns people into inflatable objects. They don't transform just yet, but they see the many people who were transformed.

Also I included Ken because he'd be around the same age as the Phantom Thieves

Hope you all enjoy!
>>8070
Wow I never thought you would post more stories. I love the TV show segment at the end, it's a nice touch.
No link just yet, but I'm wrapping up edits on a fairly long story and will be self-hosting it and some other stuff.

Is there any sort of "consensus" on what sort of content should be called out up front for a story?
Why are so many stories morally depraved or outright murderous? Most wg fiction is plagued with shitting feces, cannibalism, incest, or some other garbage. Why can't people just write "girl eats, girl gets fat, wardrobe malfunction"?
Let's see if I can at least post - trying to share something I finally finished but I keep triggering an auto ban some-fucking-how
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Ok cool there was something in there that the system didn't like, anyways let's keep going.
This is the first time I've ever shared anything so dunno if this is the "right" way to list elements, but:
Second-person narration with a male protag
Slow-burn / realistic-ish weight gain pacing
Lots of stuffing, sex, and some lady characters starting out fairly fat
No permanent protag weight gain, but a couple fantasy/dream scenes have it
Generally positive, if very horny vibes

I hope it doesn't suck.
>>8071
I was so into the story I forgot to fap.

I loved this story and by some slight extension, you.
>>8071

This is stellar. You should be proud, your characterization and descriptions are so vivid.
>>8123
Wow, thank you! There's indeed a lot of me in there but full disclosure, I'm not a witch-faced lesbian and I've never killed anyone.

>>8124
Thanks, I really appreciate that!
All these women are looking for you everything they dream of. Sad your stuck in that story what ever you want to call it situation. Wish I could help you. Just run.
Posting my DA here. Getting through my family members passings and, once I'm done with masters school in a few months, will be posting more. Really do hope to go back to the maid cafe series as the emotional arcs of the girls were intense and grounded from a lot of interviews with friends and wife, but now my writing chops are up to snuff again due to the Fire Emblem story having me write more consistently, (if my new meds permit me, I'd love to rewrite some of my earlier parts). Started a short series to set up a twilight zone but wg centered stories, but idk if I'll get back to it.

https://www.deviantart.com/vallum-the-fa
https://www.deviantart.com/m-i-ki/art/What-A-Bargain-BBW-WG-Mobility-Issues-1008973603

Decided to give one of those weekly weigh-in ideas a go. This week was Bargain, and compared to some of the other writers, I went with something much more lowkey.

Story of a relationship between a loving couple with Tabitha ballooning up in recent years, but both of them more than comfortable with it, and their mobility struggles on a day-to-day basis. Suddenly, they see a bargain of a deal that might make there lives a hell of a lot easier.

Still very new to story writing, so feedback and critique is always appreciated.
I've been getting back into smut writing, and I've got a dark fantasy WG story I'm doing the rounds and shilling. It's only tonally dark; no slob/scat/vore etc. Also, forewarning, it is slow to get going. If it gives you brainworms, I have succeeded. Also, I am testing the waters with this length of a story to see if it is worth doing a sequel to it, so lemme know somewhere if I should do that.

https://www.deviantart.com/qeph/art/Something-underground-1009491734
I've just released the second installment of my story 'The Bargains', which follows the life of a young man roped into the service of a fat, lazy mistress. If you're not familiar with my writing, I do like to cover the darker aspects of feederism. Things have been fairly routine up to this point, but the following installments will delve deeper into the more morbid side of fantastical obesity.

The Bargains (Chapter 2) [Dark Fat-Fiction] by ProphetofAdephagia on @DeviantArt
https://www.deviantart.com/prophetofadephagia/art/The-Bargains-Chapter-2-Dark-Fat-Fiction-1012191341

Comments and CC are always welcome and much appreciated. If you liked this, you might want to check out '314, Gorman Diße House'.
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Holly Eaton's pretty fortunate for a 4-ton mutant blob. She can temporarily hide her real weight with a special formula she drinks every day. But sooner or later she blimps back to normal.

This OC of mine never seems to have much luck getting comments with her stories. I get a few comments with everyone else but not really Holly. I'm looking for feedback on her so I'll shameless shill her stories here. Particularly the X Reader stuff I'm curious what people think.

https://www.deviantart.com/fannofexpansion/art/Everyday-Life-With-A-Monstrous-Blob-Girl-Holly-929067538

https://www.deviantart.com/fannofexpansion/art/Holly-Eaton-s-True-Form-By-Bonusart-with-story-950694970

https://www.deviantart.com/fannofexpansion/art/Someone-s-In-the-Kitchen-with-Becca-ReaderXMaid-993302238

https://www.deviantart.com/fannofexpansion/art/Holly-s-Fed-By-You-Until-She-Breaks-Free-XReader-996522194

(alternatively, here's my Ao3: https://archiveofourown.org/users/FANNofExpansion/works)
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Rehashing a story from an earlier post with an edit pass, plus far better formatting and organization.

https://vicepeddlerscorner.wordpress.com/

Right now there's only the one story, but there's a lot to it (well over novel-length).

It's a second-person slice-of-charmed life romance: step into the role of a twentysomething young man who abruptly re-connects with a circle of chubby or gainer ladyfriends,particularly hitting it off with an amazon-built blonde who's desperate to plump up.

I'm not a very swift writer, but I've got a few other things cooking (all still male second-person, but most of them centered on the protagonist gaining weight). No promises on a timetable for updates beyond "when they're done".
who is the thick powerlifting chick in pic? I saw her here months ago but lost her name
>>8686
Nice story so far, I look forward to seeing more.
Not dead yet, and I'm gonna make it everybody's problem. I've relocated to Neocities. Site's still a bit WIP, but the basics are functional.

https://vicepeddlerscorner.neocities.org/

Now, I'm not vain enough to announce a site move without giving you wonderful degenerates something fresh for a visit:

I just finished a piece that spiraled into a short novella, based off of an erotic audio RP file of all things. Still on my bullshit of liking happy endings, so make of that what you will.

Still got a novella-length story in the pipeline- the draft isn't quite done and editing is proving to be a bastard, but I really like the concept and I want to see it through. I'm also going to eventually upload some rejected drafts and story scraps, just for fun and to pad out the library a bit.

It's probably a profoundly stupid idea to fish for feedback on a chanboard, but here goes: if there's anything you guys like or dislike, I'd be interested in hearing it (politely, please).

BTW
>>8382
The thick blonde lady is one Tracey Kelly.
As you can see, I am all kinds of responsive.
She's not a model, there aren't a lot of pictures, don't be a creep.
https://www.girlswithmuscle.com/forum/thread/1301517/?page=6
>>8686
I am back again with a new, separate story that is very different, and currently in progress, though I have already put out several parts. You can find them all collected here, and I will be posting more over the coming days: https://www.deviantart.com/qeph/gallery/93746445/performance-of-care

Brief pitch: it's a Gardevoir getting fat with mental corruption and lots of stuff related to humiliation and loss of fitness. There's a better summary of themes on the first part of the sequence.

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