>>218266Look I know I probably seem like a negative cunt but I just want to put this out there.
Alot of things don't feel right here art wise or atleast it doesent feel like salt drew it.
The positions of the background characters are weird they put the 2 most relevant background characters by the speach bubbles so it just doesent read well, also Shannon is being portrayed as a silhouette so it just reads even worse. I understand the fact salt probably dident want to spend alot of time on a single pannel but the fact it feels like the background characters have more focus on them than the actual protagonists feels bad.
I have no clue what that thing on the top left of the 1st panel is, maybe I'm just dense but I can't for the life of me figure out what it's meant to be.
The 2nd panel is great.
the line art on the 3rd panel looks a bit shoddy and seeing as how clean even salts basic sketches turn out it just doesent look right also how the boob window and boobs themselves are drawn, also things like the hair.
Salt dident draw those hands on the 4th pannel.
I know I probably seem like a complete fucking winge bag but I'm just trying to generate discussion and putting my own thoughts out there. I'm very pleased with this page and the Courtney silhouette and text has me really excited for the next page I think it's probably better than 99% of wg comic pages and I understand why alot of these things might be the case, but I'm just trying to generate a conversation because its fun to discuss things your passionate about.