>>193781I just wanted to test out some brushes and this looked like a good pic to practice on.
>>195140This looks better than your first post but I think the original drawing is going to be tough to color right no matter what. The light source looks like it's coming from behind and she's pushing up against a wall so most of her front side should be darker.
One thing to keep in mind is that the lightest shadow areas will always be darker than the darkest lit areas (for a single light source).