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Using a pic of a fat chick for the thumbnail this time...

Begging is still not allowed though, so don't fucking try it.
>>291951
I hate how funny you are
>>292070
Is this the final page?
New page uploadplease
>>292558
Would be a dream job if you are a guy.
Not sure where the money comes from, unless they are paying you with love, affirmations, and sex.
>>292558
I feel nothing from this ending, it was so predictable and their bodies are posed in a way that the only parts of them that are shown off fully are their fat arms. It's clear SDC doesn't know how to frame more than one woman being this big.
>>292567
The anatomy is fucked up especially on the brunette, her ass looks like it was drawn by circle tool.
>>292558

Genuinely the worst comic he's made so far (besides the streamer one)

The pacing is all over the place with some parts that should be longer being to short and vice versa. Its filled with timeskips instead of showing panels of the characters actually getting bigger in real time while being fed.

The art and detail itself were also pretty minimal with the backgrounds being just one color (including there clothing) or a couch in the back. There are no creative scenarios/events on how to make the characters fatter and its just them sitting on a couch or bed and eating.

The characters are also pretty bland and uninteresting with them seeing each other getting bigger nothing but as cute instead of hot.

Overall I could tell SDC didn't care at all when making this comic or what to do with and if you cant plan that before you start making the comic then you shouldn't do it in the first place
>>292589
It's impressive that SDC has gotten worse. The "Enough Bites" series and "Divas to Donuts" comics were great. It's been down hill from there.
>>292593

Agreed.

Those comics werent perfect either, but were still much better than when comparing them to the current stuff.
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Just by seeing some of the pages you can see a difference in quality.

The coloring is better with actually showing a texture difference between skin and clothing.

The panels are more creative with panels showing different parts of the girls body getting bigger or some panels being covered by someones belly, different styles of text and actually showing the character getting bigger in real time.
Im sorry for being annoying, but I really think this needs to be addressed and SDC deserves to get some backlash for it.

I wouldnt care as much if it was a small artist, but theyre an artist people have known for years and have almost 2k paid members on Patreon and this is what hes giving them.

I dont know what the response is from people on Patreon, but im hoping its the same. And since this comic is over now whats he gonna do next? Continue just doing the streamer comic thats just filler and no one cares for? Or make another bland comic to extend the lifespan of the streamer comic even more?

I honestly dont understand how hard it is to just write a hot porn story and then have it be paced properly. Even I could in 10 min come up with 5 better comic ideas than whatever shit SDC is making now and its just sad.
>>292596
Ugh

Who

The fuck

Asked

Motherfucker????
>>291951
Thanks for the chuckle, anon
>>292729

Jesus... absolutely venomous. Her sister is going for the kill. She isn't even that fat.
>>292729

Wow. Sexy ass page 🔥
A new cover just came out:
Ordered to maid
>>292730
tbh yeah, she's a bit chubby at most. I don't think this is the first time she's being so incredibly toxic, yet she's surprised why the MC (whatever her name was) doesn't like her so much. hot page overall, but I'd prefer if she stayed in denial for a little bit longer.
Im curious as too how the reactions were when pages for Never Enough Bites were comic. Were there also issues or did people say it was peak?
>>293163
It was good, but as per usual, the retards on this site were really vocal about opposing extremes and didn't appreciate any of it. "This is too fast; slow it down!" "This is too slow; quit lingering!"

Stupid people are hard to impress, so they're not worth listening to when they say something's bad. You can really only judge for yourself, but in terms of SDC's pacing and characterization (even if the character dynamics are as one-note as porn comics can get), it's a higher quality than most comics in this field that you'll find.
>>293076
My nigga, sequence and comic are the same fucking thing.
>>293180
You cannot be this retarded.
>>293177

Shame. Wish SDC didnt fall off.

>>293180

Comics are longer and have more time and characters in them while sequences are the slimmed down versions
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>>293193
>>293199
No there literally is no difference.
It is all sequential art. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sequential_art

You are just coombrained that you think that a sequence is just a "weight gain sequence" and not the umbrella term for anything with more than a single image like how it actually is.

Just more proof that people who cry the most have no understanding of art.

Pic related is a sequence, and so is the entirety of Never Enough Bites and whatever the fuck Kip is calling his current phase of his never ending story of nothing. Length has nothing to do if defining if something is sequential art or not.
>>293201

I get that, but when it comes to weight gain content specifically the "weight gain sequence" is the part where the girl gets fed and becomes bigger. Comics are the same, but with filler parts where characters talk and drop lore.
>>292589

ngl though, Shiro is the best looking girl in my opinion. That's kind of the whole reason I followed the comic till the end.
>>293303

Same. Its the most unique character SDC character made and i was hoping that would be the same for her personality, but instead she was just the same "heehee i love food" girl like the rest
>>293201
>>293205
All comics are sequential art; not all sequences are comics.

There's a clear context of what a "sequence" is in line of fetish content that I shouldn't need to explain beyond initial premise -> some sexy payoff. Some sequences may expand (no pun intended) upon the storytelling element to create a comic (emphasis on the latter part of "visual storytelling"), but you're conflating "a sequence" as we understand them with sequential art as a whole.

Tl;Dr this discussion is stupid.
I hope the next pages show Selene being horny from her size. I like her getting bigger, but its kind of boring if she is just eating and being zoned out.

Seeing a girl blush and trying to finger herself with one hand and begging for more for food while shes holding a piece of cake in her other hand is way hotter to me than a girl just looking dazed and sucking on a tube.

Or at least show her two friends getting horny from feeding her/themselves
SDC is out of ideas.
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SDC is wasting a lot of potential by not developing a storyline for these two, especially Hana's story about how she accepted the job as Liz's maid, and also showing her perspective and weight gain. And of course, her cute relationship with her boyfriend.

I'm tired of seeing so much repetitive Yuri; it's time for heterosexuality.
>>294133
Expecting a lesbian, especially one like SDC, is like asking for a tiger to go vegan. Except the Tiger will only kill you physically, not mentally by screeching about patriarchy.
>>294135
So you're saying SDC is stupid for creating heterosexual couples and not using them?

I respect that she's a lesbian, but if she has heterosexual OCs, it's to add variety to her stories, not to unleash their true potential.
>>294135
Wait, SDC is lesbian? Huh. This explains all of the cotton candy fluff yuri she makes. It's for a very specific audience, one that I doubt is the one in this forum
>>294137
Still a shit excuse. Go look at any real porn site. Or any hardcore doujin with yuri in it. Unless she has no sex drive IRL there's no reason lesbians can't also be exciting.

SDC is every bit as bad as Kip when it comes to doing the same boring stuff with every comic.
An artist being straight, lesbian or gay doesnt define what there work will look like most of the time. Its all up to the artists personal ability and experience.

Some artists who draw yuri just focus on sex while others like SDC have shifted from that to more romance/character relationships.

The problem now is with the shift SDC has done its something that a lot of the audience arent interested in and the main reason she even got popular in the first place was for her more sexual art/comics so some might even feel betrayed. Her art now feels more like shes drawing it for herself and wants to make her own fictional universe out of it instead of it just being a porn comic to share with others.

The fetish itself is also mostly for dudes who dont care much for story and character development and just want to see a hot fat girl get even fatter. There are girls who also just want to see that but thats rare with most of them just wanting to see a cute love story which im assuming is what SDC is doing.

I personally dont mind if theres a small story involved in a comic, because it might give even hotter reasons as to why a character just wants to get fatter than just "im hungry" but if the story takes over the weight gain aspect which I expected to get then thats when I lose interest. I would rather see just two girls feed and fuck eachother to see who gets bigger than read a 200 page comic of love confessions and rejections to then only get a random 5 page sequence near the end.

I hope SDC goes back to making more sex focused stuff or at least try to please both types of audiences by dedicating a project each to them with one being porn focused and the other one romance focused.
>>294137
Not only a lesbian but also not a tranny, or if she is she has by far the most convincingly female voice I have ever heard from a troon.
Is that sweetdreamcoffee on the left, or right.
>>294358
Is that Noctoon on the right?
>>294358
who is who here and where'd you find this
>>294358
Man come on leave SDC and RDG alone. No wonder they left the community, cause people wouldn’t stop trying to dox her
For those wondering. The one on the right is "Rainy Day Glutton". She used to make youtube videos but she's a vtuber now.
Doesnt matter how scummy or shitty an artist gets, posting irl stuff about makes you even worse than them
>>294369
Good to know. Also funny that Alex is evidently SDC's self-insert, not that that's a bad thing in this instance.
Anyone have that one beach drawing with the Diva to Donuts girls? Can't seem to find it on the deviant page nor the kemono
Does anyone know of a thread or a place on here that has wishroll art I wanted to see page 140 141 142
>>294141
Do we think there will be any more weight gain before page 100?

Page 85 for a 30 pound gain...
>>294415
The sad thing is sweetdreamcoffee admitted a while ago it’s gonna be quite a slow paced comic yet they said at some point after the beach it’s gonna speed up a bit so I’m gonna say it’s gonna speed up around 90?
>>294144
>There are girls who also just want to see that but thats rare with most of them just wanting to see a cute love story which im assuming is what SDC is doing.
yeah, well, you see, why make it a fat fetish comic at this point? i'd happily read a regular cute lesbian romance story without any kink. but if it's porn we're for, we all just want one thing. to be clear, i agree with you, just wanted to add to the convo.
>>294137
I, the target audience, am here. This is good shit.
>>294566

If SDC wants to make a romance story then dont have porn in it. Its like trying to cook a steak, but using water instead of oil. And by "dont have porn in it" i mean this type of fat girls fetish porn. Some romance stories also have sex scenes in them.

>>294575

Well the other 90% just want to see 2 fat girls stuff eachother with food
Also if SDC wants to make vanilla romance stories then just make an alt and start making youre stories on that alt. Change the artstyle a bit or dont have any art at all and just turn it into a book series.
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Maybe a hot take: i think 50% of the people in this thread are looking for something that wont happen with this artist, this is just how Sdc writes her story's, a lot of people like them and some dont, but if you don't like that type of story then I dont see what the point is in complaining every time a new page is released, just seems like a waste of time, if you like the art just pop in once or twice a month to see if there's new art (or just keep an eye on patreon and when new art is released pop over here), there is some actual good criticism in this thread but 90% is basically "Not enough fat porn" or "no sex" or "too basic", same with the last thread

Anyway back to lurking lol and here's a image to make up for the long message
>>294596

The problem is that SDC actually fell off when it comes to pacing, quality and character development.

SDC has done the same love stories before with Diva to Donuts, JOMB and NEB but those actually had something good in them compared to these which feel souless and needlessly dragged out.

The "50% of the people in this thread" (more like 70% if you ask me) just want SDC to do what they did before where they werent trying to build some cinematic universe with lore connections and references.
I mean I am just annoyed at the constant calls for the lesbian comics to shift into hetero, like it would somehow improve anything.
Look if you don't like yuri there are dozens if not hundreds of artists that do straight sex, even with this niche of a fetish. Kindly leave if you don't like it, you have options.

The people complaining about the same story issues or pacing or whatever else I can at least understand. Why the fuck would anyone come into a space that is unabashedly lesbian coded for the last few years (Yes I have seen SDC other works before, they were nice but the artist has said multiple times they aren't going back to it) and just complain about a this kind of thing like it is in anyway productive. At least (most) everyone else complaining has a leg to stand on and ideas that could lead to improvement. (not that it much matters given the forum we are on.
>>294658

I think people want SDC to go to the hetero route so they can self insert them as the guy in case SDC makes the guy as a person of screen and for it to be less about going "my girlfriend looks so cute today" and more of just a guy going "man i want my gf to be fat af" which I understand.

I also didnt know until know that SDC said herself shes gonna stop doing sexual stuff in her comics anymore which okay i get it. We cant force an artist to do something they dont want to, but saying you wont have porn in youre porn comic is like saying youre gonna make a burger without the pattie.
>>294665
>but saying you wont have porn in youre porn comic is like saying youre gonna make a burger without the pattie.
Porn doesn't have to be hardcore to be classified as porn, why do you think softcore is a category for it?
>>294675

I dont want some mind break levels of hardcore. Just the level SDC did before
Got page 86 anyone?
>>294751 thanks tho I mean doughnations 86 sorry
>>294799
Here we go. Comic will be faster and she’ll be bigger
Who has page 4 of the maid comic
>>295013
Even though this sequence is basic, at least it doesn't waste time like Doughnation Dependency does, as well as other comics.
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>>295013
>>295019

I wish we saw her getting bigger in the page itself and not just through timeskips like SDC did before in this example:
SDC honestly looks so lost right now.

And I mean using Google to search for Google levels of lost

Ever since NEB ended I feel like shes been chasing that same high to find a unique concept that no one or very few have done until now and while searching for it shes done nothing, but make the most basic slop possible.

- The Dougnation comic? Directionless and gives the feeling that SDC herself doesnt know where to go with it.

- Ordered to maid? Basic and theres nothing to make it stand out.

- Too Many Skip Days? Just sad.

A new and hot concept isnt that hard to make when its something fictional and you have so many themes to choose from. It can be something futuristic, historic, scifi, fantasy ect....even if you want stuff to make something slice of life there are still a lot of options avaliable, but SDC does none of them....why?

Even me right now while writing this I have 5 story ideas in mind that are WAY more interesting than what SDC is doing right now and im sure im not the only one.

Why is SDC acting like she has done every single comic idea possible when that cant be further from the truth? Has SDC said anything about her future plans? Or asked the audience for help or what they want to see? Does she not care and just ignores everyone?
>>294586
>And by "dont have porn in it" i mean this type of fat girls fetish porn. Some romance stories also have sex scenes in them.
agree. that's like a difference between full-on porn and erotica (which i consider to be a regular normal romance story with sex scenes like you said). SDC should look into making the latter and promote it as such because it seems that's what she wants at the end of the day. that way, everyone would be satisfied.
>>295045

To be fair, she's an excellent artist, but it's clear her strength isn't writing, but to be fair even these recent stories are being shadowed by the much more succesful stuff she has made. Comparing 7/10 with 9/10 makes the prior look shitty, had you seen the superior work they've done
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>>295070

Her art isn't bad I'm not saying that, but when you combine it with her shitty writing and storyboarding it just gets brought down a long with it and her recent comics haven't been close a 7/10 at all. Sure for those who prefer vanilla it could be but for me whose reading their work is to see fat girls get bigger they are 5/10.

Some could say that "because the comic only has 5-10 pages she cant cram a lot into it so she can only do timeskips" when that just isn't true. A lot of others artists I've seen have done the same short comics, but with much better pacing and paneling which you can see in the given examples and SDC either lives under a rock and doesn't know these better examples exist or she's too lazy now with trying to improve after her ego boost from getting popular from her JOMB and NEB series.

SDC just needs to hire a writer and storyboard artist if she lost those abilites and if she can make 5k a month just from her patreon sales then I'm sure she can save a couple bucks from that into hiring some people.
Does anyone have archives of sweetdreamcoffee
>>295243
You could check them out on kemono their stuff dates back to when they were doing male content
>>294799
The whole grooming aspect of this still rubs me the wrong way.
>>295259

Damn legit didn't realize it until now....that's fucked up. A stalker following a streamer and then meets them irl, but hides thee fact the stalker knows them.
>>295259
>>295262
SDC usually puts a groomer character or adjacent in her comics.
Liz, the stalker character in Doughnation Dependency, and the maid in Ordered to Maid.

I mean groomer in the sense that the character Transends just being a feeder or enabler. By also trying to phycological change the character.
Although I really wouldn't take it too seriously, the entire point of these stories is to just a fat girl doing cute fat girl things and a character that either drives the plot and or can act as a self insert for the reader.

Some of you guys try reading into fat fetish comics like they are Shakespeare and then get mad that the story sucks narratively when the post nut clarity kicks in.
>>295455

Thats why I refered to the redhead as a stalker and not a enabler or feedee like the rest because at least they already know the person they want to make fat or just met them and develop a relationship with in the end while the redhead doesnt care about that and just moves on to the next girl when she gets bored.
>>295457
Could of just gave up the math.
>>295455
So SDC has a rape fetish just like Vivziepop?
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>>295472
I don't think so. I think its more so she doesn't know how to write a character that doesn't come across that way.

Not that is really a bad thing for he characters to have these tendencies, since the feedee character is always into it or accepting of it and they have other qualities. Also these are the characters that usually drive the weight gain in SDC's art.
>>295476

SDC just decides to give the feeders the personality of a mastermind whose always 2 steps ahead instead of just someone who likes fat girls and wants to be in a relationship with one. Like Liz in JOMB and NEB always had a smug and calm expression before she folded and became a glutton and we then actually saw her get horny.
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Anyone else on the patreon, because I'm extremely confused by the two "winners" of the polls. There were two polls, yet both winners were from one, and neither had more votes than Ann from Persona 5 on that poll. The other poll was a tie between Invisigal and Aqua, so... is SDC just lying and hoping no one notices or am I missing something?
>>295686
There's a carryover system, where a portion of the votes they got from past polls are counted. Cordelia has been there for years, so she likely had loads going in.
>>295814
okay wait hold on I think I’m starting to see the vision
>>295835

The manipulative stalker feeder found her own willing feedee
>>295814

It should be mandatory for each page to have 6 panels so that more stuff happens in that one page
>>292558
what are the other pages?
>>295457
tbf she was portrayed as a "villain"/bad person from the very first page (unlike a certain kip's character) so i don't really see the issue
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It Finally starts to get nice, i wanna see how much she fills her
>>296873

Now that the stalker has the streamer giving into being a fatty, she can now slowly turn her into a willing feedee, now the only thing to wish now is that by proxy, the stalker herself will gain too due to something preventing her from getting hands on her fatty
>>297149

I think that got abandoned
>>297125

More than 3 panels? No bullshit text covering half of the screen? Already gaining weight?

Seems like a promising start
>>297149
>>297166
No that was the end. It wasn't abandoned because a continuation was never mentioned, it's a complete sequence.
Unrelated but Sweet’s panel layouts drive me crazy sometimes. They just kinda throw a square wherever and call it good, even if the gutter is inconsistent or the flow isn’t clear
>>297877

oh i see this going the "i'm actually into it" route where she will slowly enjoy being a fatty more and more and by the time she finds out the red head is a manipulator she will give in, even if she disagrees
>>297877
This comic isn't just a "slow burn" in WG Comics terms; it's already lasted almost as long as five issues of traditional comics, and it still feels like a prologue. This is unbearable, and even if it gets good, I don't know how reading 120 pages of nothing will make it worthwhile
>>297887
You realize that this is exactly why she's started publishing 5-page comic sequences on the side, right? Best of both worlds. I think she has the best thought-out release schedule of the four horsemen (Kip, Belt, Pixiveo, SweetDreamCoffee I'm coining it right now) by far. you get The Odyssey with fun short stories on the side as opposed to just The Odyssey. It is significantly slower than the long comics she's run previously, but it's genuinely such a step up from all of them writing-wise that I consider it a good thing. Every other comic she's written (post-femboy) kinda just has cardboard cutout women eating themselves into obesity while feeding each other and whispering the corniest one-liners imaginable. There was progression, but there was never any sort of consistent plot pushing forward any interesting narrative, it was like keeping up with the Kardashians but we're at Liz's place where women just eat and become fat for 175 pages. Which, if that's your thing, more power to you! I liked it enough. This current comic is really fun though, I love just how stupidly in denial this main woman is as situation after situation crops up and she performs the most insane downplaying known to man, all while quite clearly entering chubby territory. It's pretty fucking hot, idk. I'm looking forward to seeing what sort of stunts the insane redhead pulls to continue enabling the main girl. I think it will really pick up soon, they've met in-person now so I can't imagine the payoff being too far away.
>>297890
Bitches is whores. Ok? You opened your legs because you CHOOSE TOO.
>>297887

No? The protagonist has been gaining weight steadily, we got shown different extra pieces of wg content from side characters, plus the whole point until now was that the manipulative red head finally got her scenario to finally introduce herself in person to the bottom heavy streamer, that's literally been the whole point until now
>>297890

I agree. I like what SweetDream's been cooking lately, and the plot of the main comic so far is honestly pretty engaging. Yes it's slow but the payoff always hits harder when the buildup is fleshed out, imo. The characters feel more dynamic than the last few big comics, SDC always excelled at character design but their personalities were generally so one dimensional. Getting shorter comics on the side is a great treat to keep impatience at bay.
>>297890
It’s nice to actually see a slow and more importantly consistant weight gain. The story hasn’t gone on getting distracted by some crazy side plots and remembers it’s a fetish comic first and foremost. Kayla’s weight gain hasn’t been massive, but she’s been getting good angles and actually showing off her gains while not rushing through them. It’s nice to see the chubby stage actually presant for longer than a page at most. Makes it hotter being able to dwell on it. Honestly my only real grip is that I wouldn’t mind seeing a bit more going into the pages again like when it first started. However it’s either this or scd taking more time with the pages or a break once in awhile.

Like you said too, it’s hard to get pissed off about the speed of this one when you do have another short comic running alongside it with far quicker gratification for fat babes getting fatter.
>>297912
There's hoping she doesn't time skip her gains.
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Ive noticed some weird "proportion mistakes" SDC has done on his two current comics.

With the succubus one the girls hair highlights keep mixing between red and pink when in the first page they were pink, but now its sometimes red? Idk if this is intentional as a way to show the succubuses influence or SDC forgets what color her highlights are which is just lazy. Also her friends eyes feel too far apart and her face in general looks a bit creepy. In the 4th panel where shes taking a selfie there is a hand on the right side of her belly when there shouldnt be because both hands are occupied with one holding the phone and the other one behind her head.

For the doughnation one I feel like the proportions are also an issue. The red girls forehead feels way too big and her tits look a lot more saggy than they should be and i drew in blue what I think it would look normally. The saggy tits for example feel intentional as a way to cover more of her body for SDC to draw less. One of her sleeves is also longer than the other which i drew in purple. The furniture also looks she drew it in one minute by not even making the chair parallel with the table for example.
>>297890
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>>297912

In my opinion no comic is worth edging years to just to get one final sequence no matter how good the final sequence is. People just want to read something for 5 min, finds a hot scene, beat off to it and forget about it until next week until theyre horny again.

People are saying his works before were slop and like this approach of more story when that just isnt true. Comics like Just One More Bite and Never Enough Bites are what brought SDC on the map and its the main reason anyone knows her for today. The comics also had actual interesting stories with showing Liz and how she got socialy pressured into becoming thin for the companies image and then she discovered her "magic word" and used it as an outlet for her stress. The way she kept using her power for more and more pleasure until she went over the edge and it backfired on her was also hot af. And then the sequel explored more of that by giving us backstories on Liz and other characters and showed Liz accepting for who she really was.

The current stories that SDC does lack that. You can tell that just by looking at the view count from pages alone on deviantart. The comics are just boring and bring nothing to the table. The doughntion one is just a streamer becoming mindlesly fat. The food faster one was just a worker making a girl mindlessly fat. Those comics were and are actual slop. At least JOMB and NEB had a gimmick with the "magic word" and the current succubus one has at least a fantasy element with the succubus.
>>297970
I'm sorry but I fail to see how that's an issue. not every porn needs an engaging plot.
>>298125
Doughnation Dependency doesn't have an engaging plot nor any hot scenes. It offers nothing of interest, literally. I don't see how anybody other than the most dick rideiest dick riders can defend this shit.
>>298125

If you want to make slop then make it 5-10 pages max and not 100+

>>298160

Agreed. Even if the final sequence is a 10 mi animation of just feeding and fucking it isnt worth wasting years of reading nothing but slop.
>>298201
Love the artists note, just straight up overeats having absolutely nothing to do with the gluttony demon, just a business acheiving their goals
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>>298201

I have to agree with >>297571 on the paneling. While its good seeing a character get bigger in real time in the same page, the way the panels are just squares with minimal backgrounds is lazy. The fact a panel or two are dedicated as a phone notification when that could have just been shown as a text bubble on her phone.

If you compare this page from the recent ones from SuperSnackSize there is a major difference. The way they used character overlaping the layers, different angles, different text. The whole page just feels more alice than what SDC did. A shame.
>>298448
I almost didn't realize this was them until I saw the tiny signature in the corner—
>>298604

The top panel makes her look bigger than in the bottom one and the top one doesnt have her pink highlights also two panels only...really?

I was also hoping for the succubus to be something imaginary from her subconscious or for her to slowly look more like a succubus overtime instead of her just randomly appearing in a beach.
>>298615
I imagine it must get boring drawing page after page for fat comics that can't really be shared outside of the fetish. She's definitely making some mistakes lately.

That being said, SDC does make the best wg comics out of everyone except for BWS imo. And she is consistent. BWS doesn't always have one going that I'm interested in
>>298655

Not being mainstream doesnt give the artist an excuse to lazy. They should try to put the most effort into their work to increase their popularity and not the opposite.

There are also tons of other wg comic artists that are better than SDC with a smaller following like Steel Cook, Thanzenn, Supersnacksized ect...
>>298661
All those artists are good too
>>298655
SDC just keeps making the same mistakes over and over. Their panel layout is questionable to say the least, they cant keep their characters on model to save their life, constant spelling and grammar errors that could be fixed if someone proofread the pages for 30 seconds.
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>>298699

Its a shame because they really fell off. From making hot characters with interesting panel layouts to the most minimal corporate looking content possible.


Not to mention the drop in story quality. She went from making characters with actual interesting reasons behind their weight gain and wanting to gain more by begging for food to just "unga bunga me like food...whoops I'm to fat now"

Heres are all the mistakes I've found in this comic so far:
>>I had it saged off the search engine.
>>295259
That's the hottest part of SDC's comic and signature element. Not every comic needs to be wholesome.
>>298712
Putting random blue circles and numbers next to shit doesn't explain how it's an error lol
>>298699
SDC did use your/you're correctly there on page 4, not sure why you circled it. She used to get that wrong but not this time
>>298712 meant to (you) this post
SDC did use your/you're correctly there on page 4, not sure why you circled it. She used to get that wrong but not this time
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>>298730

sorry i posted the wrong versions of the images. Here are the version with the text explanations.
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>>298733

Also forgot to mention that the backgrounds are bland with almost all of them being just a one color watercolor void or just one background detail like a couch and some bags with food Infront of her.

I'm not saying for SDC to draw multiple cities and rooms, but at least make the world feel more alive and expressive.

To compare with Supersnacksized for example there pages usually have multiple colors in one page to show the characters emotions, they also draw different comic book effects like heart symbols or strains on clothing. They even change the shape of the text clouds where if the character is angry the cloud is more sharper or if they're demanding the cloud becomes inverted. This is the type of effort and creativity I wish SDC put into her work, but clearly they're too lazy to do it.
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A comparison of a beach scene a year ago and now
>>298712
I mean making compelling stories is hard, especially with the fact every time you complete a story you have to make a new interesting idea that isn't just a copy of your previous work. Even new characters with new designs.

I can't deny the drop in quality, but I can also imagine how difficult it is for an artist to keep doing this year after year without it getting stale.
>>298796
I doubt she would ever do it.
But it would be really nice for SDC to write a 20 page comic in a way where it is in first person view of a male character working at Liz's company interacting with each of the women doing whatever task a lean to fit male would do for a a woman of over 800lbs would need.

It would keep her in the safe zone of her established universe, allow more time for minor characters, and literally offer a unique perspective in an other wise completely female universe.
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>>298796

Ok but even if you look at all her comics so far they don't feel that different from each other.

Her sequences are also similar where one sequence a gyaru gains and in the next one a basketball player gains.

I'm not saying for them to make a story with movie levels of writing, but at least create a setting that isn't predictable. Like maybe something in a medieval period with fantasy elements or a futuristic setting.

I have never fully written a story from beginning to end, but I can at least come up with concepts that are way more interesting than whatever SDC is making right now and I'm sure I'm not the only one. Even a degenerate like me knows that when you are writing a story you should plan out the whole timeline from beginning to end and make storyboards and not work on the story while in the middle of drawing the pages which is obvious that SDC does with how random the pacing is in her comics.
>>298799

Legit just a POV change comic showing us the guy feeding the girls and fucking them would be more interesting than whatever she's making rn
Either SDC is a Mossad agent or which one of these artists thought it was a good idea to make a comic to milk their patreon but its so bullshit almost everyone has one at this point
>>298841

Kipteitei and Pixiveo are probably the ones that started the trend of making comics over 100 pages long because before that i cant think of anyonr else. Other artists then saw that they werent getting backlash for it so they also wanted a piece of the pie too.
I miss when SweetDreamCoffee did traps. That's what got them popular in the first place.
>>298851

I dont remember SDC making trap content. I only remember the one comic where a guy gained weight instead of a girl.
>>298852

When they got their start on deviantart everything they did was male (most of it is still on patreon). I lost interested when they stopped drawing Astolfo.
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>>298869

Didnt know they did male stuff before. I started watching them when the Diva comic came out

>>298883

Why does the red head have KSI's hairline? One of her tits is also bigger than the other and her nose is literally on her cheek (when on the panel to the right the other girl has her head tilted at the same angle, but her nose is actually where it should be).
>>298887
It’s a good thing anon doesn’t have his own comic because the art would be so good and proportionate that we’d cum ourselves to death
>>298891

At least I wouldnt make them look like megamind and milk the comics as much as possible.
>>298896

To bef fair, being a supplier takes a lot of effort rather than just being a consumer, the thing is that it is obvious that SDC is not putting in the effort anyways
>>298910

Bro tried to defend SDC but changed his mind in the end lmao
It's so funny how even though she is a native speaker SDC still can't fucking spell. Shows how retarded people are, I guess. Then again, seeing the type of stuff she writes, I wouldn't really doubt SDC being just a bit dim (or being really skilled at writing characters who appear to be genuinely retarded).
>>299219

I dont get it. Is the succubus making her see an illusion thats shes thin, but shes actually getting fatter?

It feels like that isnt the case because in previous pages she sees she got fatter like when she lifts her shirt up and sees her belly or when tries to put on her skirt, but cant because her ass got bigger. She also literally says "sometimes I look huge, but other times I look really good" confirming that she knows shes fatter.
>>299219

Also what lazy fucking paneling. Nothing in the background and the panels are just a front and back shot of her walking...

Show her rubbing sunscreen on herself, chugging pints of ice cream, winning an eating competition...SOMETHING
can people link his stuff that has burping? I know there's not much but it's a shame he doesn't do it more
I mainly use these boards for SweetDream and Belt-Buster, and it's pretty funny to see sweetdream fans complain that she goes too fast, and should slow down for more detailed pages...

Meanwhile Belt-Buster fans complain he is going too slow and should hurry up and just make the girls fatter with less "extra details".

What do these artists not get? Just put out 27 new and original and detailed and unique and story drive and fetish driven pages every day for me to pirate without paying! It's not that hard!
>>299249

They are not the same. The issue noe is that SDC is drawing with less detail in general compared to before and also making mistakes more often while Belt Buster forgot the point of a weight gain comic is to have characters gain weight.
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Trolls hide behind ai instagram accounts
>>299407
Sweaty out of shape girls that get exhausted after even basic tasks is peak content!
Great one! I love those from Fire Emblem games. Cordelia has to talk on this topic some time
>>299515

Wise and true words. I love fatties struggling... and I love them being lazy too. In their natural habitat.
>>299610

Half the page is wasted with useless panels and like the previous page its just two back shots of her walking. Also the comic still doesnt explain how the succubuses powers work. Does the spell make her and the people around her create an illusion that shes thin because her friend in the third page didnt say anything, but then at the beach people can see her belly? She says shes put on weight, but the illusion shows she looks the exact same like she did at the start.
>>298733
this mf really thought that because he knows how to use MsPaint he is all of a sudden. master comic connoisseur. Like 80 percent of these "markups" are just you trying to sound smart.
>>299668

It doesnt matter what tool is used as long as the message behind it is clear and idk how for example writing "no highlights" makes it sound smart? Its just a statement. Also im not trying be the next SCD. Im just a longtime viewer hoping she gets her standards back to how they were before.
>>299610

I don't even care about the art quality here atp, because genuinely what the fuck is even going on here? What does the purple effect even do? She notices she is stuck in the door, but she is somehow still convinced she is skinny? What?
>>299687

that's what I'm also wondering. Does the purple effect brainwash people close to her to not mention her weight? Does she not find it weird that she's huffing, clothes not fitting and being stuck in places but when she looks down she still sees her thin body? Does the effect change the environment around her like changing a gym to a buffet? Shit like this should be clear in the comic.
The purple effect is more for the reader. I think its showing us that feeder demon is using thier magic on the sign to fool her into thinking shes going to a gym when in reality shes going to a buffet. I can assume the next page will be her in an illusion of her working out when in reality shes glutting her face. Idk how it rationalizes how she got stuck though? Maybe in her head the gym door is jammed?
>>299698

It still doesnt make sense as to how she notices her clothes arent fitting and has trouble breathing but when she looks at her body its the same size?

She literally says the "knows" she getting out of shape, but when you look at the illusion she sees on her body shes thin?

It would have worked better if the succubuses powers just made her more hungrier everytime she considered doing something healthy like she is walking towards the gym and the power activates and she pretends she forgot something at home and goes to the buffet instead.
>>299709

Well, she might feel it, but she isn't sure of it. That's probably why she feels so focused on losing weight even though in her eyes she looks skinny, but she doesn't feel skinny. You could go full illusion of anorexia, but that's fucked up to a degree. Point is, she probably feels fat, sees that she isn't fat, still is very much fat in reality
>>299712

I think it would have been more effective if her "illusioned form" would at least be chubby or slightly bigger and then overtime the line between her "illusion" and real form would be closer.

There are also panels where it looks like she sees she got bigger, but in some panels she doesn't which is what makes it confusing
>>299715

ok, you don't understand how illusions function, you explained how it fails not how it works. It's not being delusional, it's literally false reality stuff
>>299715

Like for example, next page most likely or close by, we will see her "working out" and say, as she picks up a dumbbell and lifts it she might think, she's lifting weights but in reality, she's just grabbing a drumstick and taking a bite out of it as grease goes down from her mouth, hell she might even think the grease is sweat for that matter. Another example is her thinking that she's doing runs on the treadmill, feeling like she's doing barely any running, feeling slow and sluggish. In reality, she's just in the waiting line for serving trays and plates, maybe thinking that her "protein powder" drink is helping her build muscle but it's just a milkshake and it's all adding to her flabby waist
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>>299722

Ok I'm sorry what I wrote before was bad.

I get that from her pov she think she's thin and exercises, but I just think there would have been an easier way of showing it. Like a pov shot of her looking down and showing us shes thin or even just a note saying the purple effect is how she sees herself.
>>299725
Completely fair, SDC is just bad at portraying that because she's used to writing delusional characters and got the concept mixed as well
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>>299731

True, but also I dont think its that hard to show a person being affected by a spell.

At least make the spell look like its in effect. Even im not that dumb to make the background be the same color as the spells aura.
>>299736
I'm still so sad we're not getting "Every last bite" soon. How Alex and Gina are starting to become truely immobile, just at the very edge of being bed bound. How Christina, Hana and Liz are starting to get too big to do anything whilst waddling ever so slowly more often. But instead we have a comic with good art but slow development and a comic with a lot of issues from mistakes in the setting. At least the feeder maid short comic was pretty good though.
>>299738

Every last bite will probably happen as a last resort if SDC starts losing following which im hoping she does based on the slop she is making rn. If by the "good art" comic you mean the streamer one then I will have to disagree because as shown here >>297961 she also does some mistakes in that comic and the comic itself is just really boring. The maid comic was fine, but it didnt have any hot angles or different feeding methods and was just filled with timeskips.
>>299738
This was still the most mid of all the comics she's done. I'll take Pervy Cheerleader 2 over that any day
>>300133
It's not that SDC draws badly, but she's drawing this comic too quickly, or maybe she changed her mind about the idea and that's why it's so rough. She prefers to continue it rather than cancel it.

If I were SDC, I'd make a comic about Hana's weight gain and how she met her boyfriend; it's such a good idea that the artwork would be really good.
>>300139

Honestly, i think she just thinks this comic sucks too but wants it done so instead of wasting time on this she just wants it complete so she can just go full time on doughnation dependency, it's becoming clear to her that this double comic format isn't working
>>300158
Honestly, I feel that it makes more sense to dedicate more slots to the slow-burn stories compared to the short ones, so that the long-term stories get to develop at a faster pace story-wise while the short-term stories don't get rushed.
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>>300158
>>300139

There is definetly a feeling of this comic being rushed with how bad the panels and dialogue is. Only problem with SDC focusing just on the slower paced comic is that no one would read it except that small group of people who like nothing, but filler so SDC is trying to keep both types of audiences, but it clearly isnt working.
>>300181

I do see a future of her just doing:

1. The main big current comic
2. Smaller art pieces in her artstyle with a high to medium quality shading
Judging by SDC's monthly announcement, I don't think she will stop producing two comic book series at the same time.

"I've had a lot of fun doing the short run quick gain comics, and experimenting with different types of stories, or sometimes very basic ones was nice to try out. What comics did you like the most and why? Is there a character or scene that stood out to you? Did you like the short form like the Maid Comic, and The gluttony Demon? The more Medium story focused of the Taster? Or the more gaining focused less story of Skip days? Or is Doughnation with it's long build and stronger character focus/ social focus gaining what makes you most excited?


I will be taking all feedback into my next comic. I've got the plot started by how it goes and the details it gets will take your answers into account."
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They dont hold ppl in jail for that anymore.
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>>300309

I don't get how braindead SDC has to be to not just do one comic series at a time. Every other artist I follow does just one series with an occasional sequence on the side as a way to take a break from the comic. its impossible to work on two series at the same time without one or the other suffering either in quality or writing and we can clearly see that and SDC knows that too, but for some reason still keeps doing it. Not only would doing just one series make it be released quicker, but also the artist would be 100% focused on it instead of 50/50.
>>300309
at least she's willing to accept critique. doesn't sound too bad to me.
>>300386

It just sounds like an empty promise to me. A lot of artists say things like that, but then end up thinking there the only ones who are right and if they dont like them they can find someone else.
>>300397
You missed the dip. Just say that
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>>300570

User T250 I feel I see you in every thread posting the newest stuff so thank you for being a goat and sharing everything.
>>300774
Dang. Maybe it’s just not their style but SDC always introduces a sinister feeder, only to nerf them to be more lovey dovey.
>>300887

Or she just doesnt know how to write in general?

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